WiP Wednesday

So I haven't done one of these in a little while, but decided to update everyone to my current project. It is going well, but in a different direction than I expected.

I think it's going in a slower, character developing direction than the last version, which was a lot more action scenes in the first few chapters. Now I have more character development, but wonder if it's going too slow now. My crit group has been saying that I need to develop my three dimensional characters, which I'm working on.