Friday, February 26, 2010

Free Friday

So glad today is Friday. Need the time off to recuperate, this week was friggen crazy. I'm making some progress on my Nano novel and enjoying it so far. I know there are plot issues and some other things, but it is pretty decent. Might be a bit more adult than Young Adult though as the language and violence is pretty decent.

Just a bit of a quick update is all I have for today.

So what are your plans this weekend? Writing? Playing? Do you do a lot of writing on the weekends? I tend to not write on weekends, focusing more on critiques and other minor writing things. It's more a payback for my wife giving me my writing time during the week, I kind of spend the weekends with family.

Have a good weekend.

Thursday, February 25, 2010

Interview of a character

I decided that this could be fun for a change, so I wanted to interview one of my characters from my book. Here it is.


Rebecca Stevens

JS: So how are you today?
RS: I'm doing well. just chilling on this nice day. I heard you wanted to interview me, so I said, what the heck. Might be fun.

JS: How are things at home?
RS: They've been better, I've been doing good in school finally, but they still nag me all the time. *she looks away.*

JS: Are you okay?
RS: *She glances at me*

*I feel my chair shift and it starts to slide backwards*

JS: What are you doing?
RS: You know what I'm doing. I'm not going to be...

*She lowers her eyes and the chair stops.*

RS: I'm sorry about that.

JS: It's okay. *I scoot the chair closer again*

JS: That was pretty cool. How long have you been able to do that?
RS: Since I was thirteen, so I guess about three years or so.

JS: How does it feel?
RS: Feel? I don't know, I guess normal. I don't even notice anymore.

JS: Where is Alex at?
RS: Out with Yasmine like usual. I know you wanted him to be here to, but when Yasmine bats her eyes at him, he's a drooling fool. *She smiles and sits up straight. Her blue eyes glimmer a bit of joking.*

JS: Are you looking forward to your junior year of high school?
RS: I guess. School's what it is. I just want Gretchen to leave me alone. Can you make her?

JS: No. I don't think so. Do you think you could with your cool power?
RS: *She shakes her head* No. Nope. *The playfulness leaves her eyes.* I need to get going. It's getting late.

JS: Wait just a sec. I have more questions.
RS: Another time. *She gets up and leaves.*

I tried to follow her, but she wouldn't let me. That's the end of this interview I guess. Such a timid girl.

I thought this would be fun to interview my characters from time to time. Let me know how you liked it in the comments. Thank you.

Wednesday, February 24, 2010

WiP Wednesday

Well its another Wednesday and things have calmed down. I've been sit for the past couple days, which is making it hard to focus on my current projects. I have gone over 6 chapters in my Nano novel, which is better than I remember. It's nice giving it three months to simmer before looking at it again. So far I have a few plot changes in mind which might help make it more cohesive and a better story overall.

My other WiP is still at a stand still in that it is getting about two hundred new words at a time when I work on it. I like the story, but think I might need to start it over and go in a different direction as I think the current one might not have the legs that I thought it had at first. I'm thinking something in a similar vein of "Buffy the Vampire Slayer," but haven't completed settled on it. I know my favorite element of the story is the inner conflict of having the narrator possessed and being able to communicate with the "thing" that is inside and them working together to solve their mutual problems.

How is your current projects going? Anything you want to report?

Tuesday, February 23, 2010

Samsung Moment Review

I am going to do a quick review on my new phone that I purchased.

My wife coerced me into getting a new phone when hers started to die, and how I always am, I like to get the top of the line of the new gadgets, when its time to upgrade. So I did my research, Cnet is awesome by the way, and it came down to two Sprint phones, the HTC Hero and the Samsung Moment.

I chose the Moment for a couple of reasons, the faster processor, 800mHz compared to 564mHz of the Hero, the clearer screen and the slide out keyboard.

Now on to my review.

The phone was my first smart phone and I found it a bit daunting to begin with as there is so much stuff you can do with it. Email, surfing the web, watching TV, etc. But the Android operating system made it pretty easy to do. I just logged into my Gmail account, which is required and it loaded up all of my contacts, so that made my address book up to date, which was nice, and it even sent the contacts that I didn't have email's for into my Gmail account so I have that information in there as well. Pretty neat.

The interface of Android 1.5 was pretty easy to use as the touch screen was clear and responsive. I've heard of lag on the HTC Hero, but on this phone didn't run across any, which was nice. Apps loaded up quickly and downloading was a snap. It came preloaded with some basic things such as facebook, cnn, espn, and Sprint stuff such as Sprint TV, Navigation. I found that to be nice and kept me busy right at the start.

The most important thing for me was call clarity and I have to say that this phone does very well, just like every other Samsung cell phone I've purchased.

So this is my quick review on this phone. I would recommend it if you are on Sprint, but I think other carriers might have better options for what you are looking for.

Monday, February 22, 2010

You can't call them Zombies!

The gap between him and the undead girl closed quicker than he expected. His legs burned and had been reduced to hobbling. Before even reaching the corner, she would have overtaken him. He made an abrupt and labored dodge to the right, back toward the park. He grimaced as his knee buckled and he toppled into the grass next to the street.

Luckily for him, the woman, still obviously not able to move in quick turns ran past him. She stuttered to a stop like a car on a jagged road and turned to face him again. Her dead eyes glared at him, a hunger that couldn’t be recreated by a human, even if they were abandoned on a deserted island for months, met his.

Almost hypnotized by her gaze, the wet grass soaked into his sweatshirt sleeve, snapping him out of the daze as she rushed again. He crawled to his feet as she closed the gap once again. With his heart racing and his body giving up on him, he threw himself over the railing of a house porch. Landing on the other side, he looked between the wooden planks as she tore at him like a lunatic. The gravely growl reached him before she did, and he would come to realize that it would be that way forever now.

Oblivious to the railing, she crashed right into it, a plank shot out, hitting Kyle in the chest. She didn’t try to climb, or go two steps to the left to climb the step onto the porch, she continued to reach for him through the thin boards. Her grey hands scratching across his sweatshirt, inches from tearing the flesh off of his chin. Kyle scooted back and grabbed the thin plank of wood. A sharp nail stuck out on one end and he looked at it, then at the girl who relentlessly pushed through the railing. Another plank had come loose and she had one shoulder through the gap. Her hand grasping for him.

Kyle stood up, heaving, sweat matting his hair across his eyes, and looked down at her. Those eyes would haunt him for as long as he would live this nightmare. He raised the plank, nail point down and drove it into her skull. Hoping that his movie knowledge would prove correct. At first she continued, pushing stronger, like it ignited her fuse, then he pulled it free and drove it down twice more in quick succession. Blood oozed out of the wound and she continued to push, growling and moaning as he wailed on her.

After five swings with his makeshift weapon, it broke as the nail stuck into her skull. She slumped, her hand’s reach faltered and she collapsed to the porch. Blood didn’t run from the wound like Kyle expected. He stood against the wall of the house, his heart pounding his ribs, his side blazing and his legs quivering. Taking in a stinging breath, his knees failed him and he slid to the porch. The urge to vomit made his quiver, but he held it in.

Back at the park five more of these creatures shambled out of the darkness. They moved slower than the woman did and Kyle realized that they wouldn’t do anything until they saw him. He crawled to the door next to him and quietly reached for the door knob. Hoping to hide inside, but his heart sank as the door was locked.

“Crap.” He muttered as the undead creatures were moving toward the fire and turning their backs turning on him. He got to his feet, checked to make sure their attention was elsewhere and snuck across the porch. He made his way over the railing and fell silently into the grass. Seeing his girlfriends house so close he started toward it.

He clenched his teeth and hurried as quietly as he could across the yard. He stopped at the edge of the grass and took one glace back at the fire. The creatures were mesmerized by the sight, but the flames were dying as the bush had been reduced to only a small fire.

Taking the cue, he hurried across the street toward his girlfriend’s house. To his left he heard the shuffling of feet and his body tightened, ready to run if he heard the familiar growl, but it never came. He was thankful for the power being out tonight.

Stopping in front of his girlfriend’s house, he noticed the front door open and a bloody hand print ran across the front door. He stood looking as the blood ran down the front of the door. Whoever made that mark was fresh.

Taking a look around, Kyle made sure none of those creatures were nearby and snuck up the steps. He entered the house and a sour smell hit his nose. He covered his nose and looked up the darkened stair case. Bloody hand prints moved up the stairs in steady intervals, and he knew that was where his girlfriend’s bedroom was. He shut the door behind him and made sure to put both locks on.

Footsteps moved across the hall way above him and he had to bite his tongue not to call out. If he learned anything from his previous encounter, he didn’t need to alert them to his presence. He stood at the foot of the stairway, debating with himself on how to approach this.

What should Kyle do?

1.) Search the dark and silent first floor of the house for a weapon before heading upstairs?

2.) Forget the weapon and rush up the stairs to save his girlfriend?

3.) Call the police for help?

4.) Call out for his girlfriend to see if she’s even up there before running up the stairs?

Friday, February 19, 2010

Deuces Poker Season 4 Update.

Since I haven't update you all on my poker championship a few weeks ago, my predictions were off. A lot pretty much. I think the person who I picked to be out first won the entire thing, so that shows how bad I was a prognosticator.

Anyway, so far season 4, which started early February has been fun so far. It's been a girl's game for the first two games with women winning the first two games. We even managed to have a record 28 people at the last game which was fun, but crowded.

So just wanted to update you on my poker life as well. I'm so far in 10th place for the league. Lots of new people which makes it exciting. Wish me luck, we have game 3 tomorrow night.

Thursday, February 18, 2010

Reading other genre's? Good or bad?

Thursday's always are the hardest post for me to come up with. I don't know why. The first three days have a sort of theme and this day is just left out.

I was thinking of some of the books I've read this year. The 5th book of Stephen King's Dark Tower, Stephen King's "Under the Dome." Percy Jackson's first book and now I'm reading a book called "The Book Thief."

This last book is much different than the other's mainly because of the subject matter. It's about a German girl in Nazi Germany during WW2. She steals books and that's how she learns to read. Now I like this book, well most of it, but something about it doesn't sit right with me. I can't quite place my finger on it. Maybe its the Nazi backdrop, or the very depressing nature of the story. I'm going to finish it despite all this because it is well written and so far a good story.

Do any of you have certain genre's that you don't read, or make you uncomfortable to read? Do you read outside of the genre you write? Do you think it gives you a better perspective than if you didn't? What are your thoughts on this matter?

I personally read a lot of different genre's, but I mainly look for stories that interest me. The story is key to me, not the writing or the author. How about you?