So I want to let everyone know who is struggling with your current project, keep it simple. Get back to what you enjoy with writing. If it's setting, go for it, splurge a bit. If it's characters, enjoy, get into their head and live them. If it's action, kick some butt.
So with the words of my crit partner, "Keep it simple." Don't make your writing more complex than it has to be. Now go out and write.